REFLECTION

REFLECTION

A Poem by Betty Hermelee
"

Brevity, love

"
Your reflection
mirror of obsession
moves
like a slow waltz

© 2019 Betty Hermelee


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This might be the most unusual grouping of thoughts! The idea of "obsession" (intense) seems to bounce off the idea of a "slow waltz" (relaxed) . . . I like contrasts, but this one is so "out there" . . . it takes a while to get used to it. I'd rather have a thought-provoking poem than one that's predictable! It's always good to write with unexpected details (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 4 Years Ago


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Intriguing, Betty. It brings so many thoughts to the forefront by using a few well placed words.

Posted 4 Years Ago
This might be the most unusual grouping of thoughts! The idea of "obsession" (intense) seems to bounce off the idea of a "slow waltz" (relaxed) . . . I like contrasts, but this one is so "out there" . . . it takes a while to get used to it. I'd rather have a thought-provoking poem than one that's predictable! It's always good to write with unexpected details (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Your poem
Mirror of creation
Reflects
As clearly as truth

Well done.
Alan


Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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 Added on December 14, 2019
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Betty Hermelee
Betty Hermelee

Black Mountain, NC



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My love of poetry results from my love of art. As a painter I am able to express myself on a canvas. As a poet my words come from my heart, my moods, sometimes sad, mostly upbeat. I like to use vivid .. more..

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