SPARKLE

SPARKLE

A Poem by Betty Hermelee
"

nature, winter

"
Late fall nude shrubs surrender
winter's offensive
crystals sparkle on thorny twigs

© 2020 Betty Hermelee


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I love how many words you've chosen that have sharp stickery edges, like the pricking sensation of cold winter. I agree with J about wicked phrasing! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"nude shrubs surrender"
wicked good phrasing there.

j.

Posted 4 Years Ago


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 Added on January 1, 2020
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Betty Hermelee
Betty Hermelee

Black Mountain, NC



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My love of poetry results from my love of art. As a painter I am able to express myself on a canvas. As a poet my words come from my heart, my moods, sometimes sad, mostly upbeat. I like to use vivid .. more..

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