BEYOND THE PLANETS

BEYOND THE PLANETS

A Poem by Betty Hermelee
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Brevity poem; hope

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My stress soars beyond the planets
birds' whistles hush
senses daze
ghostly notions
shroud me in heartbreak
one star catches my eye
perceives my torment
sprinkles me with warmth
to ensure a serene plateau

© 2020 Betty Hermelee


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In life, there's always a solution to a problem, and not taking control of the situation and doing nothing will only make your problems worse. One way to find hope is creatively and poetically express your inner feelings; like this poignant write - a great share... :-)

Posted 2 Years Ago


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Betty Hermelee

2 Years Ago

yes, for me to relieve stress, writing is a great outlet.
Thanks for reading, appreciate it!!.. read more



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We all need to find a little serenity when our stress levels reach fever pitch. Thank goodness for your star. Thank goodness the presence of that star was able to reduce your discomfort and soothe your frazzled self.

Well conveyed Betty. The moon and stars work for me, but also the peaceful lakes near home. They transport me to a better place. All good wishes dear poet.

Chris

Posted 2 Years Ago


Betty Hermelee

2 Years Ago

Very true Chris; stress cna actually lead to heart attack or stroke; there has to be away to fell th.. read more
Chris Shaw

2 Years Ago

You are more than welcome :)
Well, we must be thankful for that one star shining tranquil in our sky. Blessings of peace, love, joy and light. F.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Betty Hermelee

2 Years Ago

Yes indeed Fabian; thanks for the the reading!

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Betty Hermelee
Betty Hermelee

Black Mountain, NC



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My love of poetry results from my love of art. As a painter I am able to express myself on a canvas. As a poet my words come from my heart, my moods, sometimes sad, mostly upbeat. I like to use vivid .. more..

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