BEYOND THE PLANETS

Brevity poem; hope

My stress soars beyond the planets

birds' whistles hush

senses daze

ghostly notions

shroud me in heartbreak

one star catches my eye

perceives my torment

sprinkles me with warmth

to ensure a serene plateau

Reviews

[Phill Oz O'fee]

In life, there's always a solution to a problem, and not taking control of the situation and doing nothing will only make your problems worse. One way to find hope is creatively and poetically express your inner feelings; like this poignant write - a great share... :-)

[Betty Hermelee]

yes, for me to relieve stress, writing is a great outlet.
Thanks for reading, appreciate it!! Fondly, Betty

[Chris Shaw]

We all need to find a little serenity when our stress levels reach fever pitch. Thank goodness for your star. Thank goodness the presence of that star was able to reduce your discomfort and soothe your frazzled self.

Well conveyed Betty. The moon and stars work for me, but also the peaceful lakes near home. They transport me to a better place. All good wishes dear poet.

Chris

[Betty Hermelee]

Very true Chris; stress cna actually lead to heart attack or stroke; there has to be away to fell the calml thanks again for your lovely review!

[Chris Shaw]

You are more than welcome :)

[Fabian G. Franklin]

Well, we must be thankful for that one star shining tranquil in our sky. Blessings of peace, love, joy and light. F.

[Betty Hermelee]

Yes indeed Fabian; thanks for the the reading!