BREAKUP

BREVITY POEM

Thursday

last exam

edgy, jitters

study in a thick fog

troubled about the breakup

could she wait

one more day?

 

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

oh man! how your poem raises up in me the stress of College finals .. and to have the question of a breakup to boot .. i would be a wreck! i was a wreck in College anyway ;)))))))))))))))) great read ...very emotive and relateable in this wonderful brevity poem! well done! i think i need a wee bit of Jameson after that memory lane :)))))))))))))))))
E.

[Betty Hermelee]

Thank you so much for your kind review!

[Einstein Noodle]

you are so welcome .. thanks for sharing it!

[Paul Bell]

They'll be plenty of guys when she gets to University.
Why do they give you exams when your love life is in tatters?
No wonder people fail on mass, the stress of it all.

[Chris Shaw]

Oh the timing Betty says it all here. You need a clear head for exams and if your love life has turned upside down, that's not good news. Takes a strong will to cast the heart aside in favour of the mind.

Chris

[Betty Hermelee]

Thanks Chris, agreed, timing all off! Thanks for the review! Fondly, Betty