HIDDEN

Romance in the skies

HIDDEN

 

My lips mimic the moon’s smile

My eyes rest in a star’s core

Please appear and venture

With me on a cloud

To the obscure outer space

A place of warmth

On a candle lit planet

 

Limb to limb

Lips seal

With moist breath

Our bodies flicker

With the candle’s dance

We are intimate on cloud dust

Shifting in cool darkness

 

We fear earth

With our passion exposed

So, we’ll drift the cosmic domain

Until our affair consummates

B.H.

 

 

 

Author's Note

Thanks for reading!

Reviews

[Poetic Beauty]

Drifting off in the cosmos to be intimate with someone you love away from prying eyes

[Betty Hermelee]

That's the secret to success! Thanks for reviewing.
Best, B.

[Betty Hermelee]

I was looking for a new poem from you, but couldn't find it...will keep searching!

[Poetic Beauty]

I have new ones I write everyday. It’s a pledge I made to myself a few months ago but I have only added Restless Repeating in the last couple of days

[Betty Hermelee]

Got it! I’ll check to be sure I read it

[Poetic Beauty]

No problem thanks for taking an interest in my writing!! 😊

[Betty Hermelee]

why not, it's exquisite!!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

when the feeling is this good between two people, they surely do not want to come down to earth.
And that moon will keep smiling.
j.

[Betty Hermelee]

Thanks always for a lovely review J.
Best, B

[John the Baptist]

Not sure what to make of this one. The first two stanzas seem to conjure up a fantasy world where the speaker and an unnamed addressee frolic sensually, away from all cares. Then the third stanza opens with "We fear earth." Is this a confession of a rejection of reality? The concluding lines seem to affirm such.

[Betty Hermelee]

I think they fear the earthly, I guess you could call it reality, as they are embarrassed to be seen intimately on earth, more comfortable in another world....this is all sort of other worldly...thanks for reading john....B