Angel In Tears

 

You are an angel in tears, perfection hurting
You are beautiful, but in pain
You are the angel in my dreams, the demon in my nightmares
You make me smile, you make me cry
You blur the line between sane and insane
You confuse my senses and make me believe
You are light, you are dark
You are happiness, and at the same time pain
You are an angel, you are a demon
You are my angel in tears

 

 

Reviews

[Pink Poison]

I can really relate to this writing. I know exactly how you feel. I love your first line. It sets the tone of the poem perfectly. Great read!

[Leran Vakem]

Great poem, just a few things. Again try a smaller font. Can't tell if the lines are to be broken like that.
Second and as always why not try the words sanity and insanity instead of sane and insane. But it is up to you.
Leran Vakem