Pogo Stick Love

Darling, your love is like a pogo stick,
B E
O C
U N 
and BOING! 
The constant up and down, spring, spring, SPRING! 
The crimson flowers peeled back in their natural state, oh how I wish to love you baby,
But you make me shake! 
R A T T L E
and rollllll. 
I'll tell you what my 3rd grade love, how about we meet up under the monkey bars and maybe...
Share my extra snack?
How about it my highschool sweetheart? Wanna hop in my car and 
B          U            C 
       O           N          E?
Hey my darling wife, how about we make love under the stars, our perfect union dancing in the night sky. 
You make me ShAKe!
R A T T L E
and rolllllll over to the other side of the bed silly!
Make room for sissy, make room for my son!
Make room for all the love I have for you,
Make room for the one.

Reviews

[Shapirta]

wow! great poem! descriptive, and creative! also, can you do me a favor and read 'the silver necklace'? i want to know what others think of it! any constructive criticism is totally open!