Unvisibly seen

                                 Unvisibly seen

Unmistakably lost at sea, 
my ship is slowly sinking without cease
   out here on the open sea
alone cause that's where i want to be
 its so silly when u think about it
I'm out here killing me
 don't need any help from my enemies
cause I'm my worst enemy
the only person can save me is me
 so Father God creator of all things
knowing u have an ear to your children willing to call him near
 so lord I'm calling u here
please forgive me for my sins
 I thank you for keep me,  for as long as u did
 I've received the son of the king in said i believe in
Jesus name
knowing he rose from the grave with all power in his hands
  I need you now your not visibly seen
but your love is real from the beginning to the end
 please forgive me for my sins
and let me in

Reviews

[biggerthenu]

thanks your a faithful reader and very nice i just try to say true and push it out

[Becky C Strukamp]

Your emotions are well penned in this poem. You put a lot of heart and soul into this poem.