NOT YOU AGAIN

YOUR LOVE IS A "DRUG"

oh please don't do this
again
I've been trying to avoid you
at all cost 
It took months to get you fully out my system
now here
you go
trying to crawl your way back In my face
hey boo
I know you missed me
and all the good memories of the
 things we use to do
yea sure I do
but
I don't need you anymore
I remember you leaving me on the floor
boiling my eyes out clawing at the floor as they pulled me out the door
hoping and praying for you too fight for me
all the countless times they told me to leave
spending every nickle I had just to be with you
frequently I do tend to remissness
on what we use to do
I loved you
how could you leave me
really I didn't want to
I recall you hitting the floor
by that time I was gone
we kissed for a moment
so they could wake you up
I was so glad to see you again
then all of a sudden your family showed up
just to
drug you out the room
 before I could even began to enjoy you
 oh you fought like a raging bull to stay with me kicking and screaming what could I do?
 I was powerless with out you
 I couldn't move
so how have you been doing?
no thanks I'm staying away from you
NOT YOU AGAIN

Author's Note

IM back again with my bad grammar
and another poem wrote wrong i hope you like it
:D
please share!!!! your thoughts
with much love Ray Smith
I HAD ADD TO MY REVIEW POST ITS NECESSARY TO FULL UNDERSTAND THE POEM TO KNOW WHAT IM TALKING ABOUT
OK NOW I WAS SO DECISIVE IF I WANTED TO DISCLOSE WHAT THIS POEM IS ABOUT I WROTE IT TO THROW EVERYONE OFF TO VIEW IT AS A LOVE BATTLE BUT ITS A ADDICT BATTLING A OLD DRUG HABIT PLEASE RE READ WITH THIS IN MIND PICTURES AND ALL

Reviews

[Captain]

Love lost and addiction is a couple of ways we learn to appreciate what we have and grow stronger as people.
Sad story, hard experience,
however like the technique you used with the strikeout text.
Interesting style, I like it.
'Captain

[temoralez]

Thoughts:
I would never have guessed this had to do with "old drug habits," but hey we all have our own addictions whether it's drugs, alcohol, porn, videos games, food, etc. You get what I mean. I know it's not easy trying to stop an addiction. It's like a poison that can take over your mind, body, and soul, but I congratulate you on walking away from the addiction. Sometimes, it doesn't even take a strength of will to walk away, but simply the thought that there's something better than this.

Constructive Criticism:
I'll leave your grammar alone since it's your style. Rappers don't even always use "proper grammar," so why should it matter if you worry about grammar or not.

[Susie Q]

Addiction, no matter what it is can bring such sadness to a life. I liked the way you depicted it. I don't have a clue about a drug habit but you brought the picture to light. I got what you were trying to say. Thanks for sharing.

[Ladie NiQue]

I liked how you crossed out the lines the other person was saying.. I definitely enjoyed this poem. I pictured this being performed, and it's so deep.. Loved it..!

[Plagued Monumentally]

I like how you crossed out the words that he or she said in this poem. It made us realize that you didn't give a crap about what things that person was saying. We all know what its like to finally be over someone, just for them to come back and make you love them again.

[biggerthenu]

thanks im happy u like it and this is so very true but at some time we must say not you again!!! thanks for the review

[Christina May Shanaberg]

Addictions to alcohol, drugs, food, tobacco, etc. can actually be like breaking off a bad love affair. Very insightful of you to depict it this way. A very nice write!

[biggerthenu]

thanks BABy im happy you loved it this would be the first poem you read of my plus i believe your the first one to once the detail in the pics thanks a lot it took some editing to get what i wanted

[MS. BABy]

I loved this, the in between the lines of it and the pic are awersome.