NOT YOU AGAIN

YOUR LOVE IS A "DRUG"

oh please don't do this
again
I've been trying to avoid you
at all cost 
It took months to get you fully out my system
now here
you go
trying to crawl your way back In my face
hey boo
I know you missed me
and all the good memories of the
 things we use to do
yea sure I do
but
I don't need you anymore
I remember you leaving me on the floor
boiling my eyes out clawing at the floor as they pulled me out the door
hoping and praying for you too fight for me
all the countless times they told me to leave
spending every nickle I had just to be with you
frequently I do tend to remissness
on what we use to do
I loved you
how could you leave me
really I didn't want to
I recall you hitting the floor
by that time I was gone
we kissed for a moment
so they could wake you up
I was so glad to see you again
then all of a sudden your family showed up
just to
drug you out the room
 before I could even began to enjoy you
 oh you fought like a raging bull to stay with me kicking and screaming what could I do?
 I was powerless with out you
 I couldn't move
so how have you been doing?
no thanks I'm staying away from you
NOT YOU AGAIN

Author's Note

IM back again with my bad grammar
and another poem wrote wrong i hope you like it
:D
please share!!!! your thoughts
with much love Ray Smith
I HAD ADD TO MY REVIEW POST ITS NECESSARY TO FULL UNDERSTAND THE POEM TO KNOW WHAT IM TALKING ABOUT
OK NOW I WAS SO DECISIVE IF I WANTED TO DISCLOSE WHAT THIS POEM IS ABOUT I WROTE IT TO THROW EVERYONE OFF TO VIEW IT AS A LOVE BATTLE BUT ITS A ADDICT BATTLING A OLD DRUG HABIT PLEASE RE READ WITH THIS IN MIND PICTURES AND ALL

Reviews

[biggerthenu]

Thanks Chris for sharing what u thought

[biggerthenu]

thanks pop u got it u understand my bad grammar and art happy u seen it thanks for the review

[Ruth]

The strike through lines actually take on a persona of their own here :) This is a well thought out poem love..very clever and the note makes me see this so clearly...what is first apparent is the duality to this....the missing of that experience and then the addressing....wonderful piece! xx

[Becky C Strukamp]

I re read this after reading your notes and wow, very powerful. You penned this to precision. Loved it even more the second time around.

[biggerthenu]

thanks inyrdreams it had to be crossed out thanks for taking time to read it

[Becky C Strukamp]

I enjoyed the structure here. The cross outs were definitely an asset to this writing.I loved it. Excellent work.

[biggerthenu]

im happy u liked it but everything means something in this one
JUST TO DRUG U OUT THE ROOM?

[Tasha]

This was really good, I liked how you crossed some of the words out. I understand it now with the pictures and all.
♥ Ta'Shandra