My mind

My mind

A Poem by Bigoja321

I’ve always traveled through cycles in my mind and this is the first poem I have written

All is well and all is right
My brain just flickers that burning light
All is well and all is good
Mind control I never could
A constant cycle I cannot stop
My own demons have set up shop
Will I ever stop my brain
Or will it bring me constant pain
I just can’t stop my hurtful mind
But in the end I will be fine
Live and breathe another day
Because in this world I’m here to stay

© 2020 Bigoja321

Author's Note

This is my first one , be gentle friends !!!

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I liked this heaps
The rhyming and rhythm and meaning and message
Well done 👍 welcome to the writers cafe it’s a great place I’ve only been here three years you’ve come to the right cafe

Posted 2 Days Ago


2 Days Ago

Thank you very much
Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)

2 Days Ago

No worries look forward to seeing more of your work

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Added on March 26, 2020
Last Updated on March 26, 2020
Tags: #depression, #mind, #myfirst



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