A Fine Perception

An ideological remarks that were biased to some extent but soon pulled back to its real shape.

I can see invisible voice

I can hear flickering light

I can catch the cold breeze

That passes through my sight

I can stand on the sea

I can drown in the soil

I can fall up to height

I can lift myself down

I can face fear of dark

I am afraid to the light

The choice seemed mine, I made ago

Some certain ways this life should go

I deemed I was free to live and feel

To get immersed in what’s not real

But then you get some rules of life

What I assumed, was made by divine

A journey I started, begins to decline

It is when my heart rebels to fight

Bringing my assumptions back to my sight

I felt the happiness is what you draw

Live your life with some flaw

O tell me God if is it fair

To live a life in such despair

Reviews

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The last realizations here turned this good read into a great read!
Though few restrictions are annoying in life but an option is always there called - living....Nothing takes birth without a reason....and that's why flaws are in us...now tis all upon us how were gonna find out the reason behind it....I love my flaws, they love us so much that they're never saying bye in fact they hide themselves for a few time just in order to make us gain the success we carve for....mmm, I chattered bit too much! You're poem was actually a great read :)

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It's whole my pleasure...you're heartedly welcome!😊