Me and Time

Suddenly I felt nothing is mine,

the sun is harsh neither moon shines,

and when I miss so much my own smiles. 

then why people say everything heals by time!

Reviews

[Diana Wolf (Jacqueline ..]

It sounds like there is a lot of confusion and hurt in this writing. I hope you find what you need to keep moving with time, because I have found that time cannot do it all on it's own. I know I just kind of reviewed the feelings not just your words, but it is how I wanted to respond. Maybe look at the grammar a little to make sure it reads how you want it to read.

[Suman Nainpuria]

Every one have several emotions and none stays same forever, poetry is something to express what a person feels at a particular time....and its the same.

P.S. I don't feel poetry depends wholesome on grammar, by the ways it is extracted part of one among my writings.


Thanks for the review.