white birds

Little white cushions in the little cage
Just to be safe, just to be safe
After the marriage they'll have to fly
and fight for themselves to survive

After the cermony,
they were released,
they were probably thinking
does the world ever cease?

The world so big and scary
and even bigger for them
this will remind you
Your just like one of them

The birds fighting in a world to survive,
escaping, by an everlasting flight,
but once, you have  to hit the ground
then the little birds, start make the life of sound

Reviews

[Poe Redd]

This is a great metaphoric poem. I especially love the first stanza!

[∂αʌ<..]

your imagery of the a new married couple through the birds is magnificent!
i like the way you manipulated the concept of marriage!
loved it!^^

[alexis]

that is saying what happens to us after we turn 18 and get married.thats scary

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

A super write :)

[amdc101]

Wow. I really loved the poem and the author's tools you used. :)

[An owl on the moon]

What a tender symbolism flies on wings through your words.. the lives released and lives merged... And yes, the world is vast and scary at times.. So glad it doesn't have to be lives on one's own.

[deeps]

Such amazing wonderful write.
Love the flow & rhyme scheme.

[Vinod Kumar U K]

Nice job natural quarrels,

[Tasha]

Wonderful description. Well done.
♥ Ta'Shandra

[TheElfPrincess]

Great description and emotions. Very good, well done.