Candles

Candles

Candles flicker in the soft wind
Room unlit, curtains closed
closed door,
no one can come in

the soft nuzzle on my cheek,
making my head feel warm and loved
The soft touches on my arm,
makes me phantom his huggling warmth

I can't sleep
I can't lay still
waiting...
then he says, ''''Goodnight teddybear'''

and I respond all the same
Goodnight daddy bear

Author's Note

thanks to the the reviews i could edit and improve myself

Reviews

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

A cute and warming read, great write :)

[∂αʌ<..]

This poem actually made me smile...i think you brought a positive light in that unlit room!
a very nice poem!

[amdc101]

A very nice and sweet poem. I really enjoyed it.

[Coyote Poetry]

A very nice poem. Create a peaceful place. Good to find sleep with your teddy bear in the calm of the night. I like this poem. A peaceful and calm poem. Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote

[TheElfPrincess]

Short and sweet, I love the ending. Well done.