Heart

Heart

My heart is closed,
Shattered,
Broken,
Empty

My heart is of stone,
Cold,
Hard,
emotionless,

Or atleast I wish it was
My heart is warmed by any friendly thing,
My heart is soft against any human thing,
Hope will be,

That my heart day
One day will fit just me,
It will then protect ,
What it lacks now,
Because I am soft,
From the inside out

Reviews

[nevermindfan1991]

Nobody likes to feel vulnerable. I mean no one. We all like to keep our chin up and protect our heart from being affected by others. I really enjoyed reading this poem, It was really relatable.

[Thea]

Aw...Simply beautiful, Black! I really love this... :)))

[TheElfPrincess]

A touching, delicate poem. The emotions were very realistic and beautiful. Well done, it was very good.

[Tasha]

You picked these words and they painted a beautiful picture. Great job.
♥ Ta'Shandra

[Daniel Thomas Andrew Da..]

Sensitive. A very touching poem on the delicate heart so many of us find ourselves embroiled with. A good poem. The length was not too much, neither was it too short, but it expressed itself perfectly. I liked it. Well done. Daniel.

[amdc101]

There is nothing wrong with having a soft heart, although I can definately relate to this feeling.

[Luke Sampson]

Words that paint pictures =] the essence of any good writing =]

[thesecretivegirl]

I like the way you but your feelings into it without having to completely describe them:)

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

A beautiful poem, that captures the yearning so well :)

[MYSELF]

Black,

A painful creation striving for being armed to the evils of the environment
...

Simple yet elegant as I say..

Regards,

MYLIFE