Flags

Flags

A Poem by Josh P
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Just how ive been feeling for a while

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As i go on my voyage of life
I see many a ship, but none like mine.
My journey has taken me to many lands
but none of which i can make my stand.

My alliances change as a snake with its skin
But i cannot change who i am within.

After fifteen years i fear my journey has come to an end
Seeing the world and all its bends
Has worn my hopes of fitting in.
But for reasons uncharted
Half mast is the position i have never departed. 




© 2011 Josh P


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Beautiful my brotha my brotha! I was reading this before and didn't think much of it (to be brutally honest.) But I came back just now, and I'm really sorry broham. This poem, especially the last lines, are great, ESPECIALLY for being an unplanned first. We all go through hard times--hang tough.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Thanks dude i didnt think anyone would actually like this poem its actually my first and it was actually pretty fun

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Dude, I love this. I felt a tear coming on, lol.
Hang in there man
-Jay

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on February 22, 2011
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