Blue

an ode to escapism

blu-----e..i fell away..and sated change
all my skies were fading gray
and i think about yo-----u..i stepped away and disengaged,lost my thought but not the pain
i fell away..and sated change
fell away in jaded chains
i fell away and sated change

and i kne-----w..diving down..and drowning me
all my seas were fading gray
all the pain had disengaged.all the joy was re-arranged
lost all hop-----e..i held the shame
i fell away..and sated change
fell a floor in wading veins
i fell away and sated change

the tides to pull are burning me
germ of wheat it beckons me
smoke the seed and then we'll harvest hur-----t
lost our minds but not the game
i fell away..and sated change
fell ashore in fiery waves
i fell away and sated change

blu-----e...i fell away (i fell away)..i disengaged (i disengaged)
and i kne-----w..rising up..and breaking me
wouldn't be the en-----d..and nor the star-----t
of the torture how it follows thee
and rips the soul apart (the soul apart)
i fell away..and sated chang-----e

Reviews

[Eustacia]

Ooooh! Had to log in straight away to comment this, it's so good hun, I love it, and I wish I could hear it, I mean, make sure you post the song on youtube but I wish you would sing it too. It has an Opeth tinge to it. Some really good lines as well:

'Fell ashore in fiery waves' I love the term fiery waves, such an oxymoron that works! Heh been doing some of those in my English Lit class and they all suck... 'an honest theif' yeah right...

I like dthe whole of that stanza though, the idea of the fire and the wheat and seeds and smoke. I'm interested how the 'blu----e' bits sound though, I read them quite slushy.

Also liked 'jaded chains'

Hey write more put more up.