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Aching away

Aching away

A Poem by Bladecatcher
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sad one from a while back..was one of the first songs i ever recorded with a band,sombre ,but i lived :)

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lost in my pain
i find myself staring at white walls again
lost in my pain
like a carefree soul swimming at night in the rain..
deep in my pain
the outside world seems so distant again
lost in my pain
sometimes, it can take me away..

I think of how distant I have become
in my pains, they take me away

lost in the pain
I'm reading the same phrase over and over again
lost in my pain
watching those memories playing all over again..
deep in my pain
I'm standing on the borderline of wicked and sane
lost in my pain
sometimes, it can take me away..

I think of how distant I have become
in my pains, they take me away

I think of how distant I have become
in my pains, they can wash me away
I think of how they will succumb
in my pains, they can take me away
I think of how they make me so numb
all my pains, ach------ing away
I think of what i have become
my pains, I wish they'd just go away..


© 2010 Bladecatcher


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Pretty fecking heavy, can really sense a lot of depth in this. I think it gets the point across very well and it wasn't overdone at all. This line stick out: I'm standing on the borderline of wicked and sane. Sounds like a long drawn out battle.

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Bladecatcher
Bladecatcher

Brizvania, QLD, Australia



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I write songs,some short stories here and there.I like to tell stories,some may leave an off taste in your mouth.To sum me up, I am not a sheep or a helicopter,I am human and all alone in this world i.. more..

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