A Poem by Ethale Captor

Happy Birthday, my October Birthday.


Lock me up before October

'Cause I'm not mentally sober

Make no sense, make no rights,

Lock me up before October


Lock me up before October

I will break free for sure

Fear and want inside your eyes

Lock me up before October


Lock me up before October

Many people I can lure

Into my world of no return

Lock me up before October!


Can't wait for you to lock me up

Lock me up in chains and ropes

Waiting for the game to be over

I'll be locked up before October


Hate and Malice, poison chalice

Take a sip to break the harness

There is no longer a valid cure

It'll all be over in October..

© 2012 Ethale Captor

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this reminds me of a song i wrote.
This flows very well, very nice job with this, the repetition makes it stay in your head.

Posted 9 Years Ago

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Ethale Captor

9 Years Ago

I believe you are the first to review this poem of mine, you have my thanks.

9 Years Ago

anytime, my friend

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Added on November 12, 2012
Last Updated on November 12, 2012
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Ethale Captor
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