I'm Sorry

An unrequitted love poem.

I'm sorry

I need you

Please do not

Leave me too

 

I'm sorry

I miss you

I need you

I love you

 

The nightmares

They haunt me

Please help me

They'll kill me

 

I'm sorry

I'm so scared

When you're gone

And I'm alone

 

I'm so scared

Terrified

I'll never again

See your eyes

 

Please hold my heart

It's yours to keep

Just, please don't

Lay me to sleep

 

But before I go

And die in my sleep

Here is my heart

I'm sorry, it doesn't beat

 

I'm leaving now

Last look into your eyes

I'm sorry, I already miss you

With that, I say goodbye...

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Elena Covaci]

This is so blatantly honest and despairing, I feel almost instantly gloomy with the thoughts of the sadness behind the writers eyes. Your writing appeals on so many levels. Very good work!

[Ethale Captor]

Thank you very much.

[Rose of Gondor]

Intense, raw emotion and pain dripping through every word. A moving write!

[Ethale Captor]

Thank you

[Rose of Gondor]

My pleasure. :)

[RachelReaper]

"Here is my heart

I'm sorry, it doesn't beat"
were my favorite lines. This was filled with such raw emotion, you truly weren't holding anything back

[Ethale Captor]

Thank you, it was my intentions.

[marie]

it tugs at the soul.....

[Ethale Captor]

It is meant to. Perhaps one day it shall tug at the soul for which it was intended.

[marie]

i really want to ask who is that... but hey not for here and i can probably figure it out with the right information and time put to it

[Ethale Captor]

I know you could.

[marie]

So might I ask what knowledge is needed:)

[Ethale Captor]

The knowledge obtainable through logic and understanding.

[marie]

grrr you know what i mean, ugh never mind.......