Bloody 'ell.

Bloody 'ell.

A Poem by Bloody Nightmare
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Just my thoughts and feelings.

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You reject me like I'm a disease,
Yet you still pull me in,
Like a moth to a light,
It hurts me but I can't help but go.
If only you could get past the differences,
And all the problems we both have,
It could actually work out,
If only you could understand.
You're what I believe is the one,
Yet you find yourself nothing more than a writhering worm.
I just hope that one day,
You could see how great you actually are,
And maybe, just maybe,
We could make it work together.

© 2010 Bloody Nightmare


Author's Note

Bloody Nightmare
Don't bother reading this, it's just my venting in a poetic matter.

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Thanks Firefly, you'll notice all of my work is based on my emotions.

Posted 14 Years Ago


I quite enjoyed this. Mostly because I can relate.

Good job, 100/100

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You can review it, but it's just my thoughts & feelings.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Hello Bloody Nightmare,

Since I wasn't suppose to read it, I guess I won't review it. So I will tell you about my day instead. It was an okay day, I guess. I mean like I had internet issues but that's nothing to get too upset about, then I went on Writers' cafe and well it was a good day, I popped out a new poem, got into fight with a teenager, but it was cool.

Regards,

Matthew

Posted 14 Years Ago



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