You Never Know

You Never Know

A Poem by ShayElexis(:
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One of my moments when my brain just starts.... going lol

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You think you know people, but if you think about it you really don’t know anyone...
Not even yourself.
You don’t know what other people will do or say no matter how much you THINK you know them and truthfully you really never know what your gonna say or do.
So do you really know yourself?
Or does your mind just make you believe you have full control of yourself?
If you have full control of yourself then what happens when you black out?
You have no control.
You don’t know what your doing.
Just like you don’t know what other people are going to do.
So honestly you don’t know yourself.
You don’t know your friends.
You don’t know your lover.
You don’t even know your family.
You don’t actually know anyone.
You can try n predict their words n actions, sure, but the chances of you being right is actually quite small. You can bet on one thing.
Everyone you know will hurt you in someway, at some point in your life.
It may be a minor thing or it may be a huge thing.
You’ll ever know.
You’ll never even see it coming.
Hell, you might not even realize it.

© 2013 ShayElexis(:


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Its good and has a nice flow. But I have a feeling the piece was written in anger.
I would love to see you go back through and add a couple of optimistic lines, if only to offer contrast.

Posted 11 Years Ago


loved it

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Added on January 4, 2013
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Tags: truth, life, people, family, love, hate, lost, unknown

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ShayElexis(:
ShayElexis(:

Fredonia, KS



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I am me. I'm a blunt and bitchy writer who is working on getting her associates for English/Creative Writing and is just trying to make it through life without killing someone. I love poetry, short st.. more..

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