Pain+Darknees=happiness?

Pain+Darknees=happiness?

A Poem by FreeSoulLoveDance

 

Whispering my name
In the cold air
Seeking my heart
Deep into the ground
Watch the water slip away
Out into the darkness
My blood drips to the ground
Only pain got me now
Nothing in this world can save me
Not even your love for me
It's so dark down here
Only the cold can comfort me now
And so I wait until I can see the light....

© 2008 FreeSoulLoveDance


Author's Note

FreeSoulLoveDance
The ending kinda sucks....srry about that

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The ending does suck, in fact its so beautiful! I see this as you say that a person feels dead and you want someone to love the person.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on February 9, 2008
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FreeSoulLoveDance
FreeSoulLoveDance

San Antonio , TX



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