'Til it's time

We fall to our deaths everytime we lie

We are cursed 'til the end of time

Our deepest darkest secrets are never realeased

Until it's time to let go.....

Reviews

[Articulated Moron]

wow....short sweet and to the harsh point, really good

[Collette]

Short and straight to the point. I haven't encountered a poem like this in a long time. Interesting topic, good technique. You convey a lot without boring the reader. Thank you for sharing, and I look forward to reading more of your work.

[Mariah]

I like this. I think the picture adds a lot to it, too. Short and sweet, to the point. :)