College Freshman in July

College Freshman in July

A Poem by Blossom
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I honestly don't know what this is. Have been having writer's block for a bit now and this is what I came up with

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Very stressed-out teens
Waiting for college to start
Tempted to dropout

© 2022 Blossom


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This has a syllable count of 5 syllables in line 1, 7 in line 2, and 5 in line 3. I think I'd classify this as a Senryu which is a japanese form of poetry talking about the foibles or weakness of man. It can be satiracal but I am not 100% sure. Moving on to the poetry, I know that feeling all too well, that feeling of change, fear, being afraid of the unknown. Whats to come in college? We don't know but don't drop out, resist the temptations! College may surprise you for the better!! Thanks fof sharing!

Posted 1 Year Ago


Blossom

1 Year Ago

Thank you for informing me on what you thought this piece might be. I was thinking the same thing bu.. read more
Aura

1 Year Ago

No problem! Your poem seems to be about facing the unknown and in these uncertain scady times, most .. read more

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Added on July 2, 2022
Last Updated on July 2, 2022
Tags: college, freshman, dropout, writers block

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Blossom
Blossom

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A beginner writer Not All My Writings Are About Me. Sometimes I write about things I have heard/read about Sometimes my writings are seen in the eyes of a fictional character and how I believe they.. more..

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