Leaves

A fun little poem with rhthym :-)

Leaves, Leaves on the Trees

A Really Pretty Sight to See

 

Leaves, Leaves Twisting 'Round

Red, Yellow, Green, and Brown

 

Leaves, Leaves Falling Down,

Finally Landing on the Ground

Reviews

[Mehul Rwat]

A good poem. One can really create poetry out of nowhere but your observation.

[Tasha]

I liked the rhythm
I agree with Sweets it would make a great song
Loved the use of colors
Great write
That's why fall is my favourite season.
♥ Ta'Shandra

[Que]

Very simple yet sweet poem.
I especially liked the layout and how you accentuated with colours.
Great job.
Cheers and have a great day. :)

[Sweets]

This poem has a great flow!
I think it's more of a song for children :)
I loved how you used the colors in here!
Great work!

[BluBubbles]

Thanks again Amber :)
I really appreciate your kind reviews

[A.E. Surdam]

I love it! The color scheme is brillant as it goes along with your poem. It's light and humourous. Such a poem to read when one is sad, it will definitely put a smile on your face. :)