Reason for living

I live and yet I do not,
I wait as my life turns to rot
I watch as the time passes by...
I live because I do not die.

Reviews

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I think this is really good. I know how this is because at times I want to be dead, but other times I want to die. Like the times I want to live is when I have happy feelings and no one is hurting me. The other times I want to die is because I am broken and hurt by someone who keeps pushing it into me. I liked the rhyme scheme as well. The emotions shown within the poem was very good. Thanks for sharing. :)

[Nickle]

that was a very solemn poem but as short as it was it conveyed a lot of emotions of hoplessness and hollowness...it flowed rlly well and the rhyming was good too...when i read this, it made me think of a girl sitting on a bench by herself in the middle of a park at night chanting this to herself...nice poem :)

[:PARAMOREchick]

that was very breathtaking