Delirious Desires

Delirious Desires

A Poem by Blue tailed kite

I wish to paint my walls;
But the colors, I cannot find.

I look at the world, jaded,
Still cannot make up my mind.

So what do we have today?
Another deceit or another way?

Something, stirs inside
What is it, I cannot determine:

A desire for truth or the desire to lie,
A desire to live, a desire to die.

© 2010 Blue tailed kite


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I hope all of us watching. B.P oil company of G.B. had polluted and destroy a great ocean. Look at their great profit. Who inspected the rigged that were drilling oil?
"So what do we have today?
Another deceit or another way?"
The cost to the effected States and countries to clean-up this mess should be paid 100 per cent by B.P oil. Who will repair the loss of the animals of th sea?
A very good poem. You made me think. Last lines were outstanding. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


Great poem! This poem says to me decisions, and how we as humans are such hypocrites, We preach truth, but every single day we tell lies. The only pointer i would give you, is to try and stay away from mediocre rhyming. Good job!

Posted 14 Years Ago



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I am a grad student who tries to do other random stuff in between running experiments in the lab. Apart from writing I also like to sketch, paint, play my guitar and synth and watch anime. more..

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