Suicidle thoughts

Suicidle thoughts

A Poem by Blue Rose

Feelings no one understands

Emotions which we fake

Just so everyone thinks were happy and life's all great.

Yet deep down inside were actually suffering

No one can see through the smiles that we fake

as we try to keep those tears in

When were alone we let them fall as we think off a way

to end the pain.

We look at the tools lying around the room and

wonder which one could hurt me enough to actually kill me

Time and time again we say I'll do it tomorrow

I'll end my life, but life never hurts us that bad.

Some of us try but fail to succeed and some of us close our eyes

and never open them again.

© 2010 Blue Rose


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Suicide is a bad subject with me. I put two brothers into grave afraid of facing the world. They left family and babies in new mamas stomach. Their babies are 20 years old. They ask me how was their Father? I tell them they were good men. I can't say much. One day I will talk to them. Ask why death was sweeter then life? Takes little to create happiness. Your child. Love and success in something you enjoy. Death is the end of the roads, Sometime must ask yourself. Who will I leave behind? A powerful poem. Questions of suicide run through most minds. Mean and hard heads like me won't allow the world to bring me down.
Coyote


Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.



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Suicide is a bad subject with me. I put two brothers into grave afraid of facing the world. They left family and babies in new mamas stomach. Their babies are 20 years old. They ask me how was their Father? I tell them they were good men. I can't say much. One day I will talk to them. Ask why death was sweeter then life? Takes little to create happiness. Your child. Love and success in something you enjoy. Death is the end of the roads, Sometime must ask yourself. Who will I leave behind? A powerful poem. Questions of suicide run through most minds. Mean and hard heads like me won't allow the world to bring me down.
Coyote


Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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I'm just me and i play life out the way i believe its meant to go i accept what life gives me and i believe the more you struggle now the easier life is in the future.... This Flash Player was.. more..

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