Teardrop on my soul

just a song draft about relationships and how they can go wrong even when they seem right.

 

 

I’m a moth to your flame,

And I can’t turn away, from you.

Here comes the jealousy again,

This time I can’t figure out, what to do.

So turn your light down low, and let it all go,

The truth can’t hide, I’ve seen inside,

The truth of your lies lay bare before me,

I try to hide but I can’t ignore it.

            (But now I know)

 

That you’re a heart taker, heart breaker

An’ I’m the one that’ll take you down.

You’re a, dirty liar, my one desire

An’ I’ll be the teardrop that’s on your soul

 

They told me where it starts,

You say she means the world, to you

And now you’re acting all polite,

But you know what your doing, just aint right

So turn your light down low, and let it all go,

The truth can’t hide, I’ve seen inside,

I tried to warn you I would tell her,

And now you know I wasn’t joking.

            (And now she knows)

 

That you’re a heart taker, heart breaker

An’ I’m the one that’ll take you down.

You’re a, dirty liar, my one desire

An’ I’ll be the teardrop that’s on your soul

 

Those words mean nothing to you,

So they mean nothing to me,

Now don’t repeat them again

‘Cos soon enough you will see.

Those words mean nothing to you,

So they mean nothing to me

Now don’t repeat them again

‘Cos soon enough you will see…

 

That you’re a heart taker, heart breaker

An’ I’m the one that’ll take you down.

You’re a, dirty liar, my one desire

An’ I’ll be the teardrop that’s on your soul…

 

Now I’ve taken you down to my level,

So maybe now you can see,

That I love you won’t cover, what I wanted to hear,

What I wanted for you and me…

Author's Note

this was difficult as i had to try and write from a womans point of view. it sounds better with the rhythm and the singing style i have in mind, but i think it turned out quite well. thanks for reading :)

Reviews

[EMP]

LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOOOOOVE IT :D always have :) i feel special cos i saw it before hand :P :) awesome stuff matey! xxx

[Cassidy Mask]

really great piece :) has great rhythm and feeling.