Eyes

Its amazing all our eyes can do
When all I want is to look at you
The depth your eyes reveal to me
Even more a future Ide love to see
Oh what beautiful eyes they're lovely

Reviews

[Audie G. Couch]

Very beautiful poem. To me, it says that you look beyond a persons surface, and you did this while noting how wonderful the eyes are in general.
Great Work.

[Hopefull]

Thank you, that's actually very close to what I was going for. Hopefully thats how she seen it.

[Audie G. Couch]

That, I can't say. But you'll never know unless you take a chance. Right?

[Hopefull]

Its a long story not meant for here. She knows how I feel. Its just up o her now

[Audie G. Couch]

I see.
I'm sure it will all work out the way its supposed to.