Four Little Rooms

Four Little Rooms

A Poem by Schatz
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Staying up till dawn writing and wishing the sun would not rise

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He lived in four little rooms

locked behind the door.

And the night shined through

where a light shined before.

A red flame burned ashen gray,

lying on the floor.


So you move yourself along.

And grind on down.

And scrape the path you drag around.

Stumblin’ on the way.

A new day with no grace to say,

starin’ down the ground.


They’re softer lies to swallow

when you’re drunk.

Or when you’re full of faith

and barely saved.

It’s only things that fade.

And leave impressions in the dark.

And demons in the haze.

Sunlight burns night away,

and darkness into day.


So sing inside your walls.

And make the lamps low.

And watch the white screen glow,

black on grey.

The words that you say.

And drain yourself away.

Another night burned white by day.

I beg you Darkness, come again!

 

Are you fated?

Or are you led?

Well either way the moon will grow.

And spread out wide across the snow.

Piled high and ploughed.

Raised between the lines.

And layered across the years.

 


© 2023 Schatz


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Many good things throughout your poem.

I would get rid of the ands... unnecessary
Would make for a stronger poem...

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Schatz

5 Months Ago

Thank you Lisa. I like using And strategically now and again, but I agree with you that most of the.. read more
Lisasview

5 Months Ago

Gosh I do not love hearing that you are feeling crappy
Probably lack of sleep???
Anywa.. read more

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Schatz
Schatz

Denver, CO



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I am a social psychology professor in Denver Colorado. Amateur poet, songwriter, satirist, and (recently for the first time) a novelette writer. Tired of academic writing. Ready to enter the world .. more..

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A Poem by Schatz