A Book by Kion B.

On the edge of adulthood Max tries to pave his own way into the world. Struggling with accepting ordinary life he finds solace in a dangerous world of his own imagining.



© 2016 Kion B.

Author's Note

Kion B.
Hello, this is my first story on this site and in general.
It starts with a short chapter that introduces the character Max to the audience. I tried to paint a picture of his personality and daily life so the readers (if any) can get some ideas about him.

My Review

Would you like to review this Book?
Login | Register


This is a very interesting story. The first chapter is really good except for a few typos (which you already informed me you'd fix). I really found the story's beginning very interesting and the depiction of the character Max was also good. It appears you are off to a good start. Keep up the good work and good luck in your future endeavors. I look forward to reading more works by you in the future.

Posted 3 Years Ago

Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


1 Review
Added on June 23, 2016
Last Updated on June 23, 2016
Tags: adulthood, coming of age, folklore, fantasy, dreams


Kion B.
Kion B.

A wannabe writer. more..

A start A start

A Chapter by Kion B.

Advertise Here
Want to advertise here? Get started for as little as $5