Everytime

Song Lyrics

There's a rainy day loungin' in my head
It's the same black cloud that crawls beneath my bed
It follows me the whole day through
It's the doubt I get, when I think of you.

Chorus:
Everytime, we say goodbye
I hope we try to make it right
But you don't write
And I don't call
We don't try to make it right at all.

There's a forking road travlin' in my head
It's the twisted path of all the things you've said
I try to follow to get me through
I just get lost eveytime I do.

Reviews

[Ed Rector]

express emotion well and has a well writen rhyme scheme.

when is the chorus supposed to repeat itself? or does this not happen?

[None]

Great display of emotions throughout. I feel your aching for love to come back or for complete closure. I really like your chorus--it reads so well. A wonderful write!