Blue Flame

Blue Flame

A Poem by Light
"

cool, hot passion!

"
Blue Flame (December 2010)
Oh my brilliant 
Blue blooded flame.
Gorgeous, dancing,
Blown by your whims;
Cooling passions
With hot burning
Satisfaction.
Oh, please blue flame
Ignite my soul
Just once again.

© 2010 Light


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this is such a wonderfully impressionistic poem,
and it reads with purism~so beautiful :)
"Oh, please blue flame
Ignite my soul
Just once again."~~~so very creative!

:)

Posted 13 Years Ago


Its delightful..and sensual, just with few words describes feelings...
I like blue flames...

Posted 13 Years Ago


The most beautiful (and perhaps painful) thing about a blue flame is that once it is far away from you, you can't see it like any other flame. Those who burn with a blue fire in their hearts are truly precious.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nothing quite like a little blue blooded flame to ingnite a red hot fire in the soul...Light it up!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Short, sweet, I enjoyed it till the last line.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Nice short one. I like your economy of words.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Just one again... let me live one more blue day!
Love this; very satisfying ~ and warm.

~lovely

Posted 13 Years Ago


Cool. Or should I say hot. LOL I'm such a dork! :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


I can def feel the passion through that!!

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on December 1, 2010
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