A Night To Remember.

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A day of stress, a day of panic,

O how I long for a nice, cozy hammok,

However will I become a master of,

Such relentless havoc.

 

Jack of all trades and master of none

But at the end of the day, when all my work has been done,

Good comments and praise,

The day has been won.

 

Contented and full all seem to be,

Lollies come out, childrens faces light up with glee,

And a certain gorgeous girl,

Lying next to me.

 

A day to forget, but a night to remember,

A family so great,

I now feel a member.

 

No matter the stress, or cost of the day,

I wouldn't change a thing,

 

Or have it any other way.

 

Reviews

[J Todd Underhill]

Ah but you shall be a master of a trade, you practice it very well right now. I liked the read!

[Mr. ECHO]

good. i i agree with coyote on that .

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the good wisdom in this poem. The day can be hard. We need the good nights to make us feel happy and content. A very good ending to a outstanding poem.
Coyote

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Lovely read:) The last few lines take it to a top level!

[EMF]

Great poem and a nice summation of nights out. But...Just one little thing. Capital I in lines 2 and 3.