Two evil boys aged just ten

Two evil boys aged just ten

A Poem by Breadrun
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This is a poem about the murder of James Bulger, I am in no way glorifying it and the reason for this poem is because I feel the crime changed how we saw the world

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Two evil boys aged just ten
Were acting more like twisted men
Thought what they did was fine
Blood as red as wine
Intent on murdering
Brutal and disturbing
that disgusting heinous crime 
The victim that was in question
Aged just two and eleven months
Suffered more than cuts and bruises
And had many bumps
They stole him from his mummy
Just 35 months
since in her tummy
Those disgusting evil boys
They walked him round Liverpool
Abusing him and being cruel
From the canal they dropped him on his head
How could he know he’d rather be dead
They tortured him sexually
He must have shown perplexedly 
These evil boys what did they know
About their actions, his death was slow
There final act was beating him
So mercilessly  until the fin
Then making it seem an accident
They lie his body on the track
Waiting for the train to attack
Two days passed until the news
How could his mother ever excuse
These evil boys aged just ten
Would rot in jail until there men
They changed the way we looked at the world
Never before had something been told
We thought it was adults who posed this threat
And still they show no sign of regret!

© 2011 Breadrun


Author's Note

Breadrun
Your all probably wondering why I have wrote this, well I remember this vividly when I was growing up, the whole world was shocked by what happened and it made me look at the world differently, I understood that you cant trust anyone because these evil demons are always lurking in the world, I felt fairly uncomfortable writing this so apologise if it’s the same when reading it

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I like that you are tackling the subjects people avoid I do this also and its a good way of separating from the wills of conformity good job and portrays the story well no glorification which is good just getting into the mindset and storytelling I liked this

Posted 13 Years Ago


Thank you, It's a very depressing story and I wanted to get that across in my writing

Posted 13 Years Ago


This was fairly dark and depressing. The rhyming scheme was pretty good too. nice job.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Breadrun
Breadrun

Lowestoft, Suffolk, United Kingdom



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Hi, I'm Breadrun, I live in Lowestoft and have just started writing properly, I've always felt im creative and can talk about any topic and hopefully that will show in my writing, I find it easier .. more..

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A Poem by Breadrun