Love

Written in 5th grade not the best

Love is like an orca that swims through ardent waters

Sometimes rough, sometimes smooth as silk

Its dorsal fin gets stuck in heartless traps; couragously, it still swims on

True love is like an orca; it stays with its pod forever

Until death abducts its loyal partner, leaving the other in solitude

The alone, caring still about her former mate, mates with another

She wanders through the waters thinking about the love she has just lost

Love

Author's Note

not the best in the world but please excuse grammar/ spelling

Reviews

[ShadowHaze]

what the f**k? what do you mean not the best?? THIS IS FREAKING AMAZING! Awesome!! keep writing!!