FAR TOO LATE

FAR TOO LATE

A Poem by Brian Kraklau

FAR TOO LATE

I saw her standing in the corner 
when the lights dimmed.

Red cheeks with a crooked smile
spoke deadly temptation.

She stood there and  danced 
as the lights drifted through the shadows.

I wanted to build up courage
but i know the time would be a waste.

I had been far too late...

© 2015 Brian Kraklau


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Very feeling and engaging. I was lost in the poem for a time. Very feeling, thirsting for more and more. Beautifully written, don't stop writing, please.

Posted 8 Years Ago
Nicely written. Good imagery and intense feelings shared. I live it! ~Sharon

Posted 8 Years Ago

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 Added on July 2, 2015
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Tags: dancing, spotlights, red lips

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Brian Kraklau
Brian Kraklau

Las Vegas, NV



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just another human trying to analyze this reality from my own limited perspective. I'm here, there, and throughout each word i write. perhaps in time I could find myself within this mess. outside of t.. more..

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