Running On Empty

Running On Empty

A Poem by Brianetics

O, these objects of our desires

like shiny trophies proudly displayed
on the mantles of empty souls
 
O, as if any of this s**t we cling to
in all of its myriad of constructs
could bare the semblance of life
 
O, what pathetic a creature
measuring its worth and that of others
by the sum total of junk it has amassed
 
 
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© 2009 Brianetics


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Do I hear a little of Whitman's influence here? Maybe not. This is a lovely piece, very American sounding in style and flow, I dig it.

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Brianetics
Brianetics

Laguna Hills, CA



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A Poem by Brianetics