Relaxation

Today I’m at peace with myself—I’m not dictated by the past. I’m not controlled by the pain.

Eyes wide shut, but senses heightened

Total peace and serenity

Not a care in the world, my heart’s content

From now until eternity.

Inhale the warmth of bliss, ever quenching

Exhale the troubles of life

Feeling like a new creature, new beginning

A virgin to pain and strife.

Unceasing joy upon my face, a constant gleam

A twinkle in my eye

Sunshine seeping from my pores, all-consuming

A never-ending supply. 

Love emitting from my spirit, overflowing

A tangible gift from above

Feeling beauty, splendor, and glee�"amazing

All-encompassing like a glove. 

Reviews

[Glen Yumang Manese]

Inspiration moves forth...
the lines have that feel of positive...
and they just blend from line to line...
good to read you work...
well-versed and your technique...
really shine through...
I will come back to read the story...
the font is a bit hard to read...
but I will give it a try...
after reading the poetry...
I can only see what lies in your narrative...

[Corrupthoughts]

I get a vision of a flowered meadow on a summer day while reading through this one. Your second and third stanza are my favorite, the flow is so solid. A very whimsical feeling. The one thing I would suggest is to not capitalize every single line, it reads better (in my opinion) if the grammar flows to the actual sentences instead of each new line.