Nature

Several lines i thought sounded pretty decent

Pedals of the pigmented immersed delicacies voyaged across the sea of wind

 Blades of greenery sliced through the atmosphere

Beds of alluring spikes suffused the land with luscious verdure

Towers of rigid mahogany offered their hands to God

Disks of foliage intertwined with the gyrating whistles of angels

Gliding creatures melodized the ethereal music of dawn

Author's Note

hope you enjoy it my first free writing poem in a very long time

Reviews

[PaperHearts]

This was a really beautiful poem! It flowed so effortlessly, and had a really poetic, lyrical quality to it that I liked. You took so much effort into describing the minute details of the scene, which, in turn, created stunning images for the reader. I thought that some of the wording was a little excessive and superflous, but for the most part, I enjoyed reading this. :) Nice work,
~PaperHearts