Groundless

Groundless

A Poem by Brooke Miller
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There are some things going on in my life right now that are making me have a lot of "what ifs" This poem helps express what I'm feeling and hoping for.

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I am neither alive nor am I dead.
A walking spirit still left unfed.
Searching searching
for that ray of light.
Something to remind me not all days are full of night.
I'm grasping onto fragile thoughts hoping they are strong.
Keep me planted to the earth show me that I am wrong.
That everything will be okay.
That everything will be okay.
And I'm just a little lost.
But sooner or later I'll find my way.

© 2011 Brooke Miller


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You'll be okay...you'll be okay. :)

Love the emotions you displayed from your heart...a confused state in life, on what will be next...life moves in stages, and you'll continue to progress and move on. Lovely poem.

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is really great! A very inspirational piece and it is packed with a lot to think about even though it's short.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really like this. As short as it is I wanted to keep reading. very inspirational.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Brooke Miller
Brooke Miller

Ocala, FL



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