Dark comfort

Dark comfort

A Poem by Bryce
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Feeling a pain within, so used to it that it hurts more to be happy

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Filled with despair, it blinds me
The pain inside, which binds me
It takes me to a place, so familiar
A warm comfort, safety in solace
pleasure in pain, i keep returning

© 2019 Bryce


Author's Note

Bryce
I dont really know what structure to use in poem writing, ive always written basic rhyme poems and this is a first attempt ag somthing a bit different

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This one describes an unusual state. The speaker has been depressed for so long that it now seems normal. In fact, it is more painful to leave it. I think an antidepressant is needed here.

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Added on April 17, 2019
Last Updated on April 17, 2019
Tags: Pain, dark, love, comfort, sleep, help, poem, fear, happy, sad

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Bryce
Bryce

Perth, WA, Australia



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Sometimes i have the urge to write poems usually related to what im feeling or going through. I like to read others short stories and poems also more..

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