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Basically This Poem is About the pain women have to endure and that we as men need to recognise and fix our mistakes

Your eyes are filled With Pain
My Heart is filled With meds
Come Take your Meds So I
Can Heal Your Pain

I feel the pain in your tone
As you mumble words
Out of Your mouth...
I feel the pain of your touch as
You leave deep scars on My
Body...
As They say Pain is the weakess
Leaving the Body.

I see the pain that lies within your
Heart afters Years of loveless love.
Everytime I see you my sight is captured by Darkness that stays within
You. Darkness caused by Man.....

I feel the pain that Runs along the
Minds of Beautiful Women that
Walk with fear in the streets of Man.
I feel the pain of the Women Who Cry But Have no Tears as The River of Tears Has Run Dry Because Of Man.

As I walk She Runs Away in Fear because of the Pain Enleashed By Man
Deep Down in her Heart Her Roots are
Damaged... Why?.... The Poison Man Spilt on her is taking its Toll....
I Feel Her Pain....

I Feel the Pain Of Mother Nature as She
Releases Storms Of nature as Anger Looms around As she sees Her Kids Crying In Corners Over Man with Heartless Intentions... Mother Nature
Leaves No stone Unturned as She Hears the cries of her Children.....
I Feel her pain

Reviews

[barleygirl]

Your poem describes my life. Starting with regular raping by older family members as a little girl, I went on to make many bad choices that perpetuated my lifetime of abuse & aloneness. There are very few men who want to deal with a broken woman. Men see me as a beautiful woman who should have a man in her life (I get told this all the time), but nobody wants to find out why I haven’t had a man in my life for decades. I’ve completely given up on all that. It’s nice to know there are men who are willing to explore this huge reservoir of pain & hurt, becuz I know many women who’ve been abused. Once you are an abused person (like me), other abused people share their stories all the time. That’s how I know there are so many of us out there. Thanks for sharing your understanding point of view. Your writing is a reflection of your honest & caring heart (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)]

so glad i sent you this margie to read. shes a very interesting talented new writer eh?

[barleygirl]

I have not found one of the read-requests that you've sent me, Julie, which I've not loved. Your perspective on writing & instinct about writers is so spot on to my sensibilities! (((HUGS)))

[Laurierose]

I like how this began with the comparison of the heart with meds and pain as tears. Very creative. I also love well developed this piece is and its message. We as women do bear the pain of mother nature and war with father time. I loved the appreciative tone here and caring, kind words of empathy. To have such an understanding is refreshing. Great read.

[Avia]

Very nice. I wish many more men felt this way. Good work. Keep writing :)

[Mimi]

I know the pain...I've seen it every where around me and I have carried it around everyday of my life, I never thought anyone could ever really understand this pain... Thank you Mpumelelo

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

this is deep and deserves more reviews. I like this a lot ill send to some of my friends.
welcome to the group An extraordinary poem thanks for sharing. Look fwd to many more from you