a theif's regret

I did this poem with DatVirgo! He's pretty cool lol.

I wonder how I got here...isolated by my insecurities.

Drifting through this barren wasteland, pondering a life I once had.

A gun in one hand a man’s balls in the other, fearless i was.

Taking what caught my eye, giving what was deserved.

Hoarding one man’s treasure, squandering like it’s my trash.

A black hole of an addiction, I constantly try to fill.

Possessed by possessions, materials made me mercurial.

Now I survive minute by minute with nothing to love, and nothing to love me.

A consequence of greed,  pulled everything in to push it all away.

Surrendering to the madness and accepting the decisions.

on my knees, I yield! I yield!. my mouth now tasting this cold barrel.

Silently praying, hoping, I will be forgiven

Forgiven for the lives I've crushed and the lies I've told

or do i really deserve that luxury when i have robbed people of theirs.

Alone I stay, ungrateful. Drying up until nothing is left of my selfish body.

Reviews

[Bats In The Belfry]

This is full of dark passion. I enjoyed the tense emotions as I read it. Great write.

[That_Girl]

The odd numbered lines sound like him... the even like you... ;) I wonder...? Nicely done- both of you!

[xxxrawr_friendxxx]

Hahahaha yeah. XD Thanks!

[Owlgirl]

Great job! I love this one! Excellent writing, and collaberations are always fun :)

[Tai Ryens]

I love the imagery you cast with every word of this poem. The concept is both well-structured and expressed by the both of you. One more thought; I absolutely adore the ending.

[xxxrawr_friendxxx]

Oh thank you! :D