Softly

Softly

A Poem by xxxrawr_friendxxx
"

I love you.. I always will, bro.

"

I'll listen as you cry yourself to sleep

Sing soothing lyrics into your ear

And kiss your tear-covered cheeks

Like my love can make you better

I promise it'll be okay

You're too beautiful to be upset

You don't deserve this cruel reality

You don't deserve this sickening pain

Please just stay alive for a while

I wouldn't be complete without you

You don't have to need anyone else but me

Because I need you.

© 2012 xxxrawr_friendxxx


Author's Note

xxxrawr_friendxxx
Part of a song I wrote

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I wish I could feel the rhythm of the song, but that's my only complaint. I love the diction. Good job!

Posted 11 Years Ago


xxxrawr_friendxxx

11 Years Ago

Yeah, it's kinda an acoustic song where the piano flows around the words. Thank you! :3
great song ....i like it ...well done

Posted 11 Years Ago


xxxrawr_friendxxx

11 Years Ago

Thank you :3

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Added on September 9, 2012
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