Babe You Wanna?

guys all girls should avoid

Babe, you wanna go on a date?

I'm playing online, can't this wait?

Babe, you wanna go for a walk?

I'm shooting zombies babe, can't talk

Babe, you wanna go to the mall?

I can't go now, my rank will fall

Babe, you wanna see a movie?

I said I'm playing call of duty

 

She sits there puzzled, no more questions

She racks her brain for more suggestions

To cure him of this game infection

What could she do to make a scene?

 To make his eyes leave the screen

She tried one last thing, before she left

Her last resort, her final test

 

Babe, you wanna go upstairs?

I'm coming babe, I'll be right there

Reviews

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

It can be a write of humor but is actually more of a serious one. I like it and I like how you said "guys all girls should avoid." There needs to be time, love, and respect as well in a relationship, which you showed well in this poem; of course among other things needed in a relationship too.

[Child of God]

exactly my point thank you :)

[I Am Svetlana]

Haha, I know how this is with guys. Girls get so frustrated with when guys play video games and pay more time and energy into that instead of giving them attention. Like, I don't blame guys for playing games cause I know guys need a way to relax and get time to themselves too. Girls need to begin understanding that guys need their space and don't always want to be around the same people or dealing with possible drama. They play games to get out pent up anger or something else, basically just to stabalize themselves after s long day.

[Child of God]

I like the way you think lol

[I Am Svetlana]

Haha, really? How do I think anyway, in your opinion?

[annabellee]

haha, this is very funny. Liked especially the ending :)

[Child of God]

Than you :P I thought so too

[annabellee]

you're most welcome :)

[hmarieee]

This is perfect haha, coming from a gamer herself.

[Child of God]

Thanks lol :)

[chicandsleek77]

Great writing your are a great poet, but I don't really agree with the ending (not my kind of thing). If I was her I'd just play the video games with him.

[Child of God]

Thanks lol and that probably would've been a better idea but I was going for a confession that guys do act this way

[chicandsleek77]

Yeah, I completely understand. A lot of people will be able to relate to it, and that's what makes great poetry. If anyone ever tells your you're not good enough, don't believe them.

[Child of God]

That just made my day thank you so much!! :)

[chicandsleek77]

Your welcome, I'm glad i could make you smile.

[Sarah Lynn]

hahaha very clever ! Nice , smooth , flowing poem, another great piece of work!

[Child of God]

Thanks lol :P

[Hitchhiker]

Heh.Heh Yeah, that will usually get his attention. It is all a matter of what his perspective is, and she pretty much had it all figured out.

[Child of God]

I thought so too lol