Your First Silent Friend

It's hard to describe

I was your first

Your first silent, patient friend

I've stuck by you through the best and the worst

And I'll stick by you 'till the end

In your arms you held me

That I'll ne'er forget

I've been by you these many years

In this I've no regret

I've stuck with you through laughter and tears

Your silent canine friend

And though I'm stuffed, you can be sure

I'll stick by you 'till the end.

Author's Note

This poem is a personification of my first little stuffed animal (a dog). It was an assignment for school and I thought I might as well stick it on here. Please criticise!
Love,
CreativeCookie

Reviews

[Cid]

Hope you got first place for your this school Assignment, because this poem does really get some worth of being at first place. Friends ain't only in suite of people but in forms of animals, birds, nature, tress and other living or non-living stuffs. As well said by 'Myth' :- "Dogs're the best friends of humans" So, this poem directly paste some existence of lives in the forms of 'Mortals'. An amazing flow of ink.

[Mary Christabel George]

Awww......!
Cho Shweet.....!
:)

[ganga ramesh]

a good write indeed....the mood you have developed around the poem is wonderful and needs appreciation...good piece:)

[Acer]

I've been by you these many years
In this I've no regret
I've stuck with you through laughter and tears
Your silent canine friend...
......
well written indeed. loved it.

[Holly Mason]

enjoyed much very nice way to take care of a stuffed friend...
we all have them even guys that deny it...love their teddy bears
thank you for sharing